Editing feels like one activity but it's three, and they get worse the more you mix them. Do the big one first — otherwise you'll spend an afternoon perfecting the rhythm of a paragraph that shouldn't exist.
Pass 1 — Structure (does it work?)
Read the whole thing without fixing anything. Keep a notepad. You're asking: does the story make sense, does each scene earn its place, does the middle sag, does the ending land? Mark problems and move on. Resist every urge to reword.
Useful test: write one sentence per scene describing what changes in it. Any scene where nothing changes is a candidate for deletion or merging.
Pass 2 — Scenes (does it land?)
Now go scene by scene. Does it start late enough and end early enough? Is the point of view stable? Are the characters wanting something? Is the dialogue doing more than one job?
Cut the first and last paragraph of a scene and see if you miss them. Usually you don't.
Pass 3 — Line (does it sing?)
Only now do sentences. And the highest-value technique here costs nothing: read it out loud. Your ear catches what your eye forgives — repeated words, clumsy rhythm, dialogue nobody would say. If you'd rather not read aloud, have the text read to you; see listening to any book with text-to-speech.
The cuts almost every draft needs
Filter words — she felt, he noticed, I saw — which push the reader one step back from the experience. Adverbs propping up weak verbs. Characters nodding, smiling and shrugging as filler between lines. And explanation immediately after dialogue that already made the point.
Get distance, then get a reader
Put the draft away for two weeks. You cannot edit something you can still recite. When you come back, print it or change the font — anything that makes it look unfamiliar enough to read rather than remember.
After that, you've done what you can alone. The rest needs someone else's eyes; how to get honest feedback covers how to ask so you get something useful. Publishing chapter by chapter on Arwy does a version of this automatically — readers tell you where they stopped, which is the one thing you can never see yourself.
Edit it, publish it, and see how it lands. Publish on Arwy.
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